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Chapter 1 of my teen fic

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Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 09:22 am
I think this has real potential. With your permission, do you mind if I give you some structural advice, and suggestions on where you could strengthen the piece?
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amateur writer
 
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Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 03:46 pm
Of course! I always welcome C&C.
Thanks for taking the time to read.
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