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Reply Tue 4 Feb, 2003 12:12 am
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I can never face tomorrow, if you don't let me share your sadness,
For sharing your sorrows with me can only lead to gladness.

I don't have all the answers, no one does it seems,
But a shoulder have I to cry on, and soften your disturbing dreams.

Any shared weight leaves that much more and lighter room for gladness
And dispels the phony lie that comes with any sadness.

I would not capture you - you don't need that extra weight.
But if I ease one ounce of heaviness, well, I think that would be just great!

I'd replace it with a smile in your heart, yours to do with what you will.
Need another? No problem, my friend, and I won't even send you a bill!

So if you help me face tomorrow by telling me what saddens you,
I will help you in your quest for life and love that is far too long overdue.

Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

Truemale
(Copyrighted 2003)
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Reply Tue 4 Feb, 2003 10:56 am
Excellent.

I hope you don't mind, but I took the coding out of the title. Coding doesn't work in the titles, all you see is coding, like . And, in the body of the work, it looks like you copied and pasted from Word. The curly quotes and apostrophes that curve inwards don't show up on A2K. Instead, you get these code strings that look like . What you need to do, in order to clean these up, is click 'edit' in your post and manually replace the code strings. That'll make everything look better. Hope this helps.
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truemale
 
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Reply Tue 4 Feb, 2003 02:38 pm
Jespah - Yes, I did cut & paste from Word, but thanks for the valuable tip...will edit from now on...was not aware my postings were doing that...

Thanks again.
(Oh yea...thanks for the compliment...)

Peace be with you.
T.
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