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Kafkaesque (minor rewrite from my happy halloween thread)

 
 
Reply Sat 30 Oct, 2004 07:03 am
The light
threw shadows on the wall,
a flickering of this or that,
perhaps an unhinged book,
a sheet or shroud,
waiting to be washed.

Kafka appeared to me that night
in metamorphosis,
scurrying about the dirt,
expressionless, expressionist,
in giant silhouette,
among the buildings
of a gyroscope world.

Kafka is the bogeyman children,
more fearsome
than any childhood fiction.
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Reply Sat 30 Oct, 2004 09:46 am
Sweet and cosmopolitan! Well done Cav!
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 30 Oct, 2004 10:12 am
Thanks Kelly! I just got your book yesterday, and I am enjoying it immensely.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 30 Oct, 2004 08:32 pm
Nice animation! Thanks for the kind words, Cav. Don't forget to post a review when you get done with it!
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