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Caution to the Winds......................................

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Letty
 
Reply Thu 28 Oct, 2004 07:34 pm
I came up wanting
The feel of the trusting
The vaunting.

The bonding of men,
The women of whims,
The dear amerinds
Of taunting.

With love from Letty
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Thu 28 Oct, 2004 07:36 pm
Cute....Nice words Letty!
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 28 Oct, 2004 08:19 pm
Well, stand up. Cute is not exactly what I was aiming for, but I'll take it with thanks and a smile.
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msolga
 
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Reply Thu 28 Oct, 2004 08:21 pm
Hi Letty!

Just looking up "amerinds" ... Embarrassed
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 28 Oct, 2004 08:26 pm
Very Happy Olga, when I get myself all together, I want to start a thank you thread as a companion piece to your apology thread.

Amerinds are simply native Americans, but in my poem, they merely mean indigenous.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Thu 28 Oct, 2004 08:27 pm
Letty wrote:
Well, stand up. Cute is not exactly what I was aiming for, but I'll take it with thanks and a smile.



What I meant by cute was just that I liked the way your words flowed...perhaps it was a bad way to describe the way I felt, I couldn't think of the right word....
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 28 Oct, 2004 08:32 pm
Stand up, my young friend, what ever word you chose was a tribute, and I am in your debt.
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msolga
 
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Reply Thu 28 Oct, 2004 08:42 pm
I've been indulging in prolonged, fixed, gazing at your poem on my screen, Letty. Very Happy I can't say I understand precisely what you've written, but it has a feeling of needing/wanting connection/re-connection to vital, treasured experiences & ways of being.


?????? Did that make sense? I did when I wrote it! ... now I'm not so sure .. Confused :wink:
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 28 Oct, 2004 08:47 pm
Olga, it was a phrase that I used long ago and it came back like a song. <smile>

When you and stand up get the chance, check out my philosophy on Be True...Be True...Be True. It may offer some insight....


For now, I must fall into bed.

thank you both, my friends.
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msolga
 
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Reply Thu 28 Oct, 2004 08:50 pm
I will! And I do like all this stuff coming coming back like a song. Very Happy

Night, night Letty.
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msolga
 
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Reply Thu 28 Oct, 2004 09:58 pm
Ah, Letty ... I read the thread (that rhymes!) ... gotcha! Very Happy
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 29 Oct, 2004 08:43 am
As always, Ms. Letty, you inspire with simple works and raw emotion :-)
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 29 Oct, 2004 08:49 am
and I can always count on Kelly to be here with a kind word of encouragement. Thanks, my friend.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 29 Oct, 2004 08:51 am
You deserve kindness. Your poetry inspires me :-)
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