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Thu 28 Oct, 2004 12:05 pm
As he walked through the halls
through the vast sea of people
they all took turns mocking and luaghing
he walked his head hung low
his eyes glued to the tiles
as he walked he never looked up for fear
fear of his peers,
he left in a daze sad, and alone
a viod of happiness
This is an observation set in a bit of a microcosm. I like it, but it feels incomplete. I recommend some additional material to set this up and perhaps to conclude it thematically.
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