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Reply Wed 27 Oct, 2004 07:52 pm
You're so like them
You're so everything I never wanted
You think he's right
Well now I know your wrong
And I feel like an idiot
For thinking that you weren't one
I used to wonder why you brothers
Were so old and always single
Well I guess I learned what's goin' down
You guys are jerks, and you treat woman
Like angels until you have them under your wings
No more will I be second place, or make that third
All three of you can just live your lives alone
Alone with just yourselves
Because that's what you deserve
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stuh505
 
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Reply Wed 27 Oct, 2004 08:02 pm
how can we not hate those who respect the ones we hate?
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 27 Oct, 2004 08:48 pm
How can someone claim to love another person with all their heart but turn around and let them get hurt my the "next" closest person to them?
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stuh505
 
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Reply Wed 27 Oct, 2004 09:50 pm
I guess I was viewing your poem through my own eyes Smile
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Thu 28 Oct, 2004 04:49 pm
Something we all do :wink:
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 29 Oct, 2004 08:41 am
Frustrated. Pessimistic. Perfect. :-)
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 30 Oct, 2004 04:15 pm
Thank ya kelly! I havn't seen much of your writing around lately?
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 30 Oct, 2004 08:30 pm
Sorry - I am TDY (temporary duty) right now to the USA, so it is hard to do anything quality-wise. I'll return to regularly scheduled programs when I get back next week :-)
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 30 Oct, 2004 09:10 pm
Ohh...hmm, well I kinda get where your going with this, but honestly I havn't really read to much about you, so what are you doing?
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 30 Oct, 2004 09:16 pm
I am attending leadership meetings at Fort Meade. Real fun stuff... I'll be back in the UK next week.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 30 Oct, 2004 09:17 pm
Oh ok, so what are you?
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gustavratzenhofer
 
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Reply Sat 30 Oct, 2004 09:21 pm
Yeah, kelly, what the hell are you?
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 30 Oct, 2004 09:22 pm
I am an Army officer stationed at Menwith Hill Station in Harrogate, UK.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sun 31 Oct, 2004 10:02 am
Uhh, ok..I got ya for real this time! I always thought about joining the army, but I guess it wasn't right for me, cause I still havn't done it!
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sun 31 Oct, 2004 01:00 pm
Been in 18 years. It is pretty good after you get some rank behind you :-)
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