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last one for the night

 
 
Seed
 
Reply Tue 26 Oct, 2004 10:07 pm
The door was open
Why did you have to walk out
I thought you were different
Yet it ended up the same
I stand to watch you leave
Hoping you turn to speak
Those words never come
Te door still open
A hope you will come back
Eyes always watching
A heart that wishes for your return
I try to let go of thoughts of you
Yet those memories of you linger
I say these things to you
Yet your back is turned
And the words are not heard
I cry tears for you
Yet they fall upon barren ground
You grew the flower in my heart
Yet now it wilts as you part from me
Will you not come back and help it bloom
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Wed 27 Oct, 2004 04:27 am
You saved the best for last! You are having a sad moment and effectively conveying it!
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Seed
 
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Reply Wed 27 Oct, 2004 11:00 am
thanks very much kelly
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