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a poem by Seed

 
 
Seed
 
Reply Tue 26 Oct, 2004 09:59 pm
If your heart has been broken
Let me try to mend it
If you have never known love
Let me be the first to show it to you
When you wake in the morning
Let me be the first smiling face you see
When you close your eyes at night
Let me be in your dreams
When you are cold
Let it be my arms you seek
When you are scared
Let me be the one to comfort you
When I wake from my dream
Will you still beside me
When the bed is warm still warm
Will it be from your body
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Wed 27 Oct, 2004 04:24 am
Deja vous? I like it
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Seed
 
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Reply Wed 27 Oct, 2004 11:01 am
glad you like
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sun 31 Oct, 2004 03:52 pm
Sounds like a savage garden song!
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stuh505
 
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Reply Sun 31 Oct, 2004 04:15 pm
Quote:
Deja vous?


Well speaking from personal experience, I imagine it's hard for him to write about anything else other than what's foremost on his mind
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Seed
 
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Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 03:08 pm
this is true stuh... with something on my mind, i find it hard writing about anything but
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stuh505
 
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Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 03:17 pm
yes, but you certainly are exhausting the subject Razz
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Seed
 
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Reply Mon 1 Nov, 2004 03:19 pm
eht hats what i do... i see something and then run it in the ground Smile
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