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Losing to Life

 
 
Reply Tue 26 Oct, 2004 08:05 am
When essence is destroyed,
And your soul is beaten,
Let life take its course,
Until you die without reason.

Controlling life without control,
Esteem evaporates, slip into darkness,
Mind lost, blame?

Yourself and no one else,
For when you play the game,
I always lose to life.
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Reply Tue 26 Oct, 2004 07:04 pm
"Controlling life without control" I liked that line....it's sooo true!!!
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Tue 26 Oct, 2004 07:05 pm
Life is a terminal condition. Excellent observational piece, poet!
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Seed
 
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Reply Tue 26 Oct, 2004 09:21 pm
i agree with stand up... that is an awesome line
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