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another poem

 
 
Seed
 
Reply Sun 24 Oct, 2004 11:05 pm
for when the night comes, i am gone
because you remind me of a sun rise
i sleep to wake to a rising sun
you are the light that warms me
the gentle hand that holds me
the day to short, the nights to long
for our time has come and gone
moments to remember
thoughts to smile over
you are in my heart
with every gentle touch
eyes that peirce
a laugh that makes me smile
it was you that made things worth wild
like a flower in spring
it was our friendship that bloomed
tears will be shed, yet no only for sorrow
they will fall for all the times I made you smile
there will be one for every time you made me laugh
those are the memories I will remember
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Reply Tue 26 Oct, 2004 06:50 pm
Most excellent, Seed! I enjoyed the interplay of your accentuated solar flourishes! :-)
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Reply Tue 26 Oct, 2004 08:59 pm
thank you very much...
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