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The love that will never be

 
 
Reply Tue 19 Oct, 2004 09:15 pm
Do I have another chance now that he's gone?
Will you think about it, or is it wrong?
Every inch of my heart beats for you.
My soul is yours, through and through.
But still it all looks grim to me.
Everything I ever wanted will never be.
I 'll never be fullfilled in life.
I will never ever be your wife.
So now i'm gonna sit and cry.
I would lay my life out ,for you I would die.
I love you, you know I do.
I only wish, you'd love me too.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Wed 20 Oct, 2004 01:54 am
Sorrowful.... and excellent...
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 20 Oct, 2004 05:21 pm
Thanks kelly, I was tring to write having a different perspective.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sun 24 Oct, 2004 04:55 am
:-)
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Seed
 
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Reply Sun 24 Oct, 2004 10:25 pm
i liked it... been there... felt that before... i connected with it
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