Poet with no Cause
 
Reply Tue 19 Oct, 2004 05:08 am
No Love

I have tried to love; yet I die without you.
To understand me, without simplicity,
I crave.
You will never know me,
I shall keep, in a dark place where you will not go.
Your happiness I confirm.
I live without.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Tue 19 Oct, 2004 10:35 am
Well done. Nice metric control and nuance.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 23 Oct, 2004 09:00 pm
I really enjoyed reading this....good writing!!
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