I'm glad that kelly bumped this thread, because when I first saw it, I was in a hurry and forgot about it.
Cav, the story is quite touching. I really wouldn't change much about it. You might want to add a bit more conversation in the forest, since it seems like a lot of time passes while the brothers are together, and we the readers are probably missing out on a bit of conversation. But, if you only intended them to say small bits to each other, then this story definitely works to that end. I guess, since the characters are so distinct and the circumstances are so emotional, I almost want to learn more about them. Again, not entirely necessary, and I like it as a short piece, but it could be longer, if you wanted it to be.
A couple grammar/style things: In the second paragraph, you use the word "bond" in three successive sentence, which sounds a bit odd. Also, it would be good for the flow of the story to include dialogue from a specific character on the same line as that character's action, since it can be confusing otherwise. For example,
Quote:"Brent?"
"What? I'm only saying that dad sure loved his liquor."
Brent chuckled.
could become
Quote:"Brent?"
"What? I'm only saying that dad sure loved his liquor." Brent chuckled.
There are at least a few places where this could help, I think.
But again, I thought that this was a great story, and I'm glad that I got the chance to take a break from writing a story of my own to read this, Cav.