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Sat 16 Oct, 2004 09:22 pm
Naked before the mirror,
I am a cliché in flames,
fire in the belly,
fire in the heart,
hot-headed.
Every phrase a reprint,
those flames mean more
than their source,
another cliché
burning
in effigy
on Guy Fawkes Day.
Guido,
gunpowder plot,
statement,
rhetoric without cliché.
I pity the straw men
torched in your name,
but who doesn't enjoy a good fire?
So the cliché lives on,
everlastingly incinerating,
as we pass marshmallows
on pointy sticks.
I'm lost love, but i admire you anyway.
Guy Fawkes day is coming! Get you fireworks, hot head! Well done!
This one is really good Cav. I especially enjoyed...
everlastingly incinerating, as we pass marshmallows on pointy sticks.
After more thought and a re-read, I really, really like the title of this one. It flawlessly draws attention to the poem. Nice!