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The Ghost room in my ancestral home.......................

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Sat 16 Oct, 2004 07:12 pm
Was just an ordinary place,
Nothing particularly odd or weird
Ever suddenly appeared,

No luminous light to cut the night,
Nor voice with low and spectral call,
It was not ominous at all.

And in that simple harmless room
There hung a portrait,
Senseless gloom.

The painting of a nameless face
That permeated all the race
Of those who had produced the place.

One could never look and see
The tombstones of an- ces- tery
That lay so close in symmetry.

It was the feel of all who slept
That made the senses feel inept
To fashion words of never met.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 16 Oct, 2004 08:06 pm
Very interesting write. I loved it. I will think upon the portrait, and "an-ces-try"...I'm very intrigued. I'm getting an ill feeling as well.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 16 Oct, 2004 08:19 pm
You know, Cav. There are nights like these that we sit and think back. Actually, that poem was a companion piece to your "Like Clockwork".
My father found an old dog half frozen in the snow, and named him snowball. He often gave mundane names to his dogs , and he did it on purpose.

When he died, and we followed the troop to the cemetery, that damn dog howled and the heavens stormed. The next day, my sister found snowball dead in the drifts. True story, my friend.

Since my dad died near Thanksgiving, I sensed a quiet presence, and that also is true.

I deliberately used the hyphenation in celebration of his deliberateness.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 16 Oct, 2004 08:27 pm
Ahh...it all fits now. Very good writing, as always.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 16 Oct, 2004 08:34 pm
Thanks, TO. I know that you have memories. I was never able to read your threads on your family. Too real and too beautiful.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 16 Oct, 2004 08:39 pm
My grandfather's memoirs are worth a read. Wink
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colorbook
 
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Reply Sat 16 Oct, 2004 08:43 pm
I enjoyed it Letty…I also got the chills reading the story about your father and snowball.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 16 Oct, 2004 08:54 pm
When I am in a less mellow mood, cav. I will definitely read your grandfather's memoirs.

colorbook, I do believe that dogs have second sight. Now don't laugh, those four legged creatures can sense what humans cannot. I have seen it happen on more than one occasion, or perhaps I'm making the happening fit the situation.

Please, my friend, write some anecdotes of your own. It's like breathing living history.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 16 Oct, 2004 09:00 pm
I firmly believe dogs have second sight. Mine does, absolutely.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sun 17 Oct, 2004 12:39 pm
Nice and vivid, Letty! I love the hyphen effect!
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 17 Oct, 2004 12:47 pm
Thanks, Kelly. I did that to make it fit the meter, but mostly because it reminded me of my father who bent the rules when necessary.
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 22 Oct, 2004 02:09 pm
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