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Fri 15 Oct, 2004 11:27 pm
Abysmal Pit Syndicate
By: Mark R. Sosa
Copyright 2004
Pestilent, devout souls of deicide, with explicit acidic neck etchings of abysmal pit syndicate ties, divulge their crazed, demoniacal rituals of inflicted martyrdom, while the ethereal hemoglobin juices of justification are now but a benign un-siphoned realization.
- The (4) predominantly renowned locations for carnalities beef- bloodbath expiration exhibitions -
1. The north-side piranha aquarium exhibition.
2. The south-side great-white death human grub-fest exhibition.
3. The east-side ebony-spinning sex swing exhibition.
4. The west-side pincher extracting exhibition.
North Side Location:
This captured purgatory hostage will be denuded in an oversized, black and brown rat infested, mucky infernal hut. Next, hot pokers are pressed against the tops of the hands and feet, while cigarette burns are administered to the ears, face, and neck for the profane pleasure of the abysmal pit syndicate. Then, its flesh is bandaged by multiple rows of fine white linen. Next, the Hades gravestone artists paint numerous picture perfect "cannibal fishes" to enhance this awe-inspiring earthly excommunication experience. Finally, the hostage is transferred and situated inside a 10 x-large human-sized fresh water aquarium tank, so when at the moment of linen to water impact, the painted-on black piranhas become real life razor-toothed, carnivorous predators. Who will mercilessly sacrifice this prey until only the natural state of its skeletal framework remains.
South Side Location:
This captured purgatory hostage enters the mobile steel cage, to be at once stripped stark naked and then doused in Isopropyl "rubbing" Alcohol from head to toe for bondage preparation. Next, multiple D-LOK ® Helicopter Rescue Hoist Hooks are manually inserted and positioned under both armpits, the inner thighs, the skin section between the genitalia and crack-hole opening, and finally both the center sections of the feet. Then the secretly shortened master bungee cords are intertwined and fastened to the cage's underneath steel attachments. Now the purgatory hostage embarks on a cryptic walking pattern to fully encounter its pre-paid individual live action, over the bridge, ripping corpse suspension. Then, as the cords are severed, the both enthralled and momentarily paralyzed inner- framework of the oceanic bone-factory inhabitants, can now behold the ensuing great-white death human grub fest.
East Side Location:
This captured purgatory hostage will be exposed on its back and secured on an ebony-spinning sex swing, with its legs elevated in a spread-eagle position. Next, to activate this east side vocal-shrilling torture exhibition, the hostage's elbows, knuckles, and kneecaps are individually bone crushed by replicated blows using the Grip 41237 2 lb. Brass Sledge Hammer. Then, the uncertified sawbones surgeon will freely administer the incisions necessary to reveal the unsealed, blood-drowned skin layers of the reddened abdominal region, to then be rolled back and stabilized by a stainless steel rolling pin. Then, this grotesque sex swing specimen's body will have its nipples, reproductive, and sodomy regions equipped for a very well grounded devil-may-not-care electrical shock session. Finally, multiple buckets of both scolding hot water and freezing cold water will be poured all over its exposed anatomy in readiness to have the death-shock switch energized. In prompting this, the voodoo blood pacts made by those rogue protégés in raven coal-black darkness will be satisfied.
West Side Location:
This captured purgatory hostage will be laid flat on its back in absolute detainee submission, with both legs bent upright and both arms at the sides. This will accurately position the ankles and wrists for the hostage-like shackle and chain connections to the slightly cracked, concrete floor. Then hand-held pinchers will extract six teeth, six fingernails, and six toenails. Next, one by one, stiletto daggers with 10" blades will be whacked into these incredibly hypersensitive areas of newly unsealed flesh. Then rags that have absorbed oil, paint, and glue are thrown down to halfway conceal this forever in darkness thrill seeker. Finally, Lucifer's hatchet men regroup around this passenger to chant the beastly brethren bonfire words of "inflame this soul" and then eyewitness another suddenly ignited and soon expired stained human entity.
In broadcasting this night's triumphant completion of the Abysmal Pit Syndicate's "martyr list," it commences the nefarious acts of festive adulation. Listed below are the exclusive in-house damnation delicacies, assuring each Hell's mafia assassin both abdomen convulsions and pulverizing anal-canal eruptions.
Appetizer: Madagascar hissing cockroaches covered in hot caramel syrup and chicken lard.
Beverage: Shaved-ice with fleshly squeezed Black Rhino urine and steaming feces sprinkles.
Dinner: Scrambled hyena brains marinated with an un-observed, secretly spiced bestiality fluid.
Dessert: Stone Fish venomous spines or black sausage insulated with slaughtered hog's blood (a.k.a. blood pudding).
In closing this deathsdoor mental illustration, I convey one concluding personal memorandum - Revelation's calculated numbers of 666 symbolize the unholy trinity of Satan.
Only in your free-willed declaration towards anti- or pro-suicidal extermination, shall it reassure either Heaven's love union or the Evil One's absolute reign in your ageless ruination.
Quote:Pestilent, devout souls of deicide, with explicit acidic neck etchings of abysmal pit syndicate ties, divulge their crazed, demoniacal rituals of inflicted martyrdom, while the ethereal hemoglobin juices of justification are now but a benign un-siphoned realization.
This doesn't make a lot of sense. I get the impression that you don't really know what any of these words mean but you just like the sound of them..?
I am really confused what this is supposed to be...is it a story? is it for something?
Oh, and welcome to A2K!
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Hello, and yes I do understand every word that I write, I'm not ignorant of my creative imagination my friend. This is about Hell, and Hell's Mafia, after the executioners kill those new inductees into hell they celebrate what they have done by having a feast.
In the end, I'm telling the reader that those who take the mark of the beast 666 are in for eternal suffering, but you still have time to get out of the extreme darkess and live in peace in your soul with Jesus in your life.
deathsdoor
People don't want to read a whole bunch of mumbo jumbo. Using huge words isn't attractive, and it doesn't make good writing!....at least not using them every second word. People aren't going to want to follow that! Sorry, that's my opinion. To me, it just someone trying to be better then everyone else, except it gives the opposite effect. Welcome to a2k also!
Pitch it to 'Fear Factor.' It would make an awesome 2-hour celebrity special.
a soul cannot be pestilent because it is immaterial
a soul cannot be of deicide, if you mean that these are the souls of deities who were slain you need to phrase that differently
martyrdome cannot be inflicted
hemoglobin is the oxygen carrying protein in our blood and can hardly be referred to as ethereal or as a "juice of justification"
you have also used hemoglobin as a verb, which it cannot be used as
your implication is that these "juices" used to be malevolent or dangerous....
siphoning is an explicit method of transporting fluids and is not used to describe the transport of non-liquids, even metaphorical ones
I'm sorry but it's really impossible to take this kind of writing seriously!
Please, keep writing...but use words which you are comfortable using conventionally...because language's purpose is communication after all.
Descriptive words are great and can often concisely do the work of many less descriptive words, but when used in such close proximity they have a sort of destructive interference because each one is telling your mind a different explicit impression...and what you end up with is a mess
It's like some twisted-psyche tortured-soul parade.
Strut that stuff!
Hello everyone
Good or bad, thanks for taking time to comment on my writing.
deathsdoor