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Tue 12 Oct, 2004 03:58 pm
Times are changing, thats for sure,
Your old fashioned, out of date,
You live in the Victorian days,
Move with the times,
Get a life,
Take a chill pill,
Or even a funny cigerette,
Thats not for me,
There's one word to me,
Thats still the same,
Respect, something you give,
Kind to recive,
Makes me happy,
Thats what i belive.
Not too bad, Joe. I had a bit of trouble establishing linearity or flow in this. Is this poem a draft or is it your final answer? It seems to have promise. I would like to read some more.
Joe has quite a few good peoms further back on this forum, you should check them out kelly!!!
Keep'em comin' Joe!!
poem
Thanks so much, its just a we thought.Still working on the poems.
You have some great material in this forum! Keep it up!
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