Reply Mon 11 Oct, 2004 09:06 pm
You silently call me down
So only I understand
Your subtle aggression
Tug of my hand

Each glaring eye
The change in your tone
Is meant for me
And me alone

Remember to smile
Remember to laugh
All of this
On his behalf

If they find out
He hurts me so
I won't live long
Enough to know
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 11 Oct, 2004 11:49 pm
I like the meter! Well done!
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carrie
 
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Reply Tue 12 Oct, 2004 04:43 am
This is really good. My sister has been in a situation like that and she is now taking him to court and he is going to jail. It's so like that, and I hope that you have never endured this.

Well done, it's great. Really tugged at my heart strings x
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 12 Oct, 2004 07:29 am
Thanks kelly!

Carrie-Good job to your sister for standing up and being strong!
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carrie
 
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Reply Tue 12 Oct, 2004 08:09 am
It took so much guts. She's a tough one alright - really drew on her reserves when it got tough. I don't think she'll be able to relax properly until he is put away, but slowly but surely progress is being made.

Cheers
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