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A little Elvish Poem (Please do not laugh)

 
 
Rosslyn
 
Reply Thu 7 Oct, 2004 01:48 pm
A star shall shine on the hour of our meeting
My heart sings to see thee
Lissenen ar' maska'lalaith (Sweet water and light laughter)
Vanimle sila tiri (Your beauty shines bright)

Ever is thy sight a joy
I shall hold onto thee
Tell me the tales of your bravery
Shimmering gold on the falling leaves

Alas the time of our parting is near
And we come to the end
I shall treasure your gift in my heart
A'maelamin (My beloved)

Amin harmuva onalle e' cormamin (I shall treasure your gift in my heart)
Mela en' coiamin (Love of my life)
Iire tel'Domeduathea (When the night masks)
I will look to the Morimaikarea (The Dark Semi-Gods)

May the leaves of your life tree never turn brown
Aa' lasser en lle coia orn n' omenta gurtha
May thy paths be green and the breeze on thy back
Aa' menle nauva calen ar' ta hwesta e' ale'quenle
Sleep well
Tenna' ento lye omenta T(until next we meet)
Until then
Quel kaima (Sleep well)
Quel kaima
Quel kaima....

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I love LotR and I was bored so i came up with this. You are welcome to critisise but please do not go "ha ha ha what a load of rubbish". Thanks!
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 9 Oct, 2004 01:33 pm
Rosslyn,

Nobody will laugh, particularly at a poem of such gentle sweetness. You should be very proud of this!
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Rosslyn
 
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Reply Sat 9 Oct, 2004 02:31 pm
Thank you Kellyvinal! This is the greatest appraisal I could ever expect Smile
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sun 10 Oct, 2004 11:02 am
Expect nothing and sing from the heart; ye shall receive a bounty :-)
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pieceofccake
 
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Reply Sun 10 Oct, 2004 04:39 pm
they said no body would laugh but- OMG THATS FUNNY! LOL! ha ha ha what a load of rubbish ha ha ha what a load of rubbish ha ha ha what a load of rubbish ha ha ha what a load of rubbishHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHHAAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHHA THATS THE MOST STUPID thiNG IVE EVER SEEN POSTED!! OMG HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHaHAhhahahhaahaHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAHAAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH







oh, no, you know im just kidding around. that was a nice "little elvish poem" keep writing
<3 <3
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Rosslyn
 
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Reply Mon 11 Oct, 2004 04:15 am
Thank you pieceofccake I admire your pitiful sense of humour.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Mon 11 Oct, 2004 04:38 am
I like the poem very much. You have a real talent.
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Rosslyn
 
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Reply Mon 11 Oct, 2004 12:15 pm
Thank you Edgarblythe Smile (I had difficulty prounancing your name >_<)
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