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wiffle balls!!!

 
 
Reply Tue 5 Oct, 2004 06:47 pm
language profound
severed the
connection

when words fill
the space we have to breathe

will we drown in your words or mine ?
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Reply Sat 9 Oct, 2004 01:35 pm
Good start, Chester. Develop this one further and place it in context and I think you will have something magnificent!
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