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Child Mind

 
 
Reply Tue 5 Oct, 2004 09:11 am
Child mind, kind,
reminder of the love
that brought you in
to a world of cruel kin
without memory,
and misguided thought
about "should we ought"
to follow the train
out of here?

The rain fell.

Happy birth became
a living death,
a corpse in paper mache,
your world,
your heaven and hell.

When the bell tolls
you will know
it tolls for three.
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boomerang
 
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Reply Tue 5 Oct, 2004 09:15 am
Oh my.

Powerful words, cav.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Tue 5 Oct, 2004 09:16 am
Thanks boomerang.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 7 Oct, 2004 06:22 am
bump
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 9 Oct, 2004 01:27 pm
a corpse in paper mache

Absolutely stunning, Cav!
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