The life of a golfball (for letty, cavfancier & Kellyvinal)

I thought the honesty was amazing here. I kept thinking about the golf ball imagery, symbolically, a perfecet sphere, with pips, in an attempt to drive people into a ptath they would not rather travel. Ecxellent.

Oh, my Gawd, blacklace. I absolutely adore it. I swear you could sell this poem to Disney Land and they would turn out a movie that would rival Finding Nemo. Since I live on a golf course, I yell,


Fore for More

lol. Thanx you 2!!!!!
Hearing complements from those who write such excellent pieces themselves is invaluble!
Some of the poem doesn't quite scan so it's not the final draft, but I am quite proud of this one!

A cowboy tale - with a modern twist! Quite ingenious and very entertaining! Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece!