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Sun 3 Oct, 2004 06:54 pm
Emotions
Blurred vision
Numb heart
Drifting thoughts
Once....
Twice...
Three times at loss
It shows in her eyes
Bloodshot from tears
Expressionless from pain
It shows in her hands
Shaking unconciously
With nibbled nails
It shows in her mouth
Cold words of hatred
The frown playing games
Up..Down..One time around
Can you see it?
The ghost of the past
Or the unseen truth of the future
Neat!...I liked alot of the phrases.....good job!
Welcome to a2k by the way, good to see more poetry on here!
Very nice piece bellavu - very nice, indeed!
Intense and well phrased - fab!
I loved the empathy and detail you went into.
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