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You're Gone.

 
 
Reply Sat 2 Oct, 2004 08:44 pm
I never made you smile,
I couldn't if I tried.
I never made you happy,
I watched the tears you cried.

I always made us fight.
I always pushed away.
I never thought that
I would ever see the day.

You're gone.
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littlek
 
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Reply Sat 2 Oct, 2004 09:04 pm
How sad!
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colorbook
 
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Reply Sat 2 Oct, 2004 09:13 pm
Well written and very sad.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sun 3 Oct, 2004 09:15 am
Sad sad sad
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sun 3 Oct, 2004 09:44 pm
Thanks for taking the time to read, and comment....thank-you.
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