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Life's crooked road

 
 
bellavu
 
Reply Sat 2 Oct, 2004 05:33 pm
I watch your eyes as your watching mine
I listen to your cries as your listening to mine
My world is constantly twisting and turning
No longer can I see the road straight ahead
I left the light in childhood to walk amongst this darkness
And now I can see my lifes been misled
I feel your pain as your feeling mine
I smell your fear as your smelling mine
I fail once and I fail again
Through all this failure there seems to be no end
But I continue to try in hopes that tommorow
I'll find a way to end all this pain and sorrow
And then one day
I'll taste your victory as your tasting mine
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 2 Oct, 2004 09:04 pm
I feel ya!
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sun 3 Oct, 2004 09:14 am
Nice see-saw effect!
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