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Sat 2 Oct, 2004 05:55 am
If day became night,
And sound became sight,
Would ice become hot and dry?
If White became black,
And forwards was back,
Would Grass become clouds in the sky?
If death became life,
And ease became strife,
Would water be crimson like blood?
If old became new,
And I became you,
Would crystal be clear as mud?
If hate became love,
And hell was above,
Would flat become shriveled and curled?
If thick became thin,
And out became in,
Could you describe the world?
I like the juxtaposition of common imagery here.
I like... IF you would post some more... :-)
This is one of the most complete poems I have seen on a2k. You have a wonderful talent.