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How Shall I Light the Fire? (rewrite)

 
 
Reply Fri 1 Oct, 2004 09:01 am
How shall I light the fire dear?
Should I use the Christmas coal
from last year?

Maybe I should toss our dreams
upon the logs, and set them alight.
It seems that might be
fine fuel for a fiery duel,
or just an excuse to be cruel.

The flames lick their lips
with vibrant tongues.

I recall a web strung
from filigree lies,
but all I see are your eyes,
and like a cheap plastic sheet,
I melt in the presence
of your overwhelming heat.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Fri 1 Oct, 2004 11:01 am
Very entrancing! Nice work Cav!
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 1 Oct, 2004 11:10 am
"...filigree lies...."

I zeroed in on that, Cav. Love it.
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