writing 20 ( need your review and style )

...I was about to say some piece of my mind when I saw who was in the car. I got stiffened .They are four person ; the driver was the fierce brother that we knew him later with name " Jason". Beside him was the sedate man who wanted to kick me out !.In the back seat , there were the charming couple sitting.

This was odd !

So , all these gentlemen were acquainted and in deep relationship , then why they came individually ?!

The old lady hadn't seen what I did , so I decided not to tell her.She will never deduct anything useful from this.Mostly , her heart would stop of panick.

In the evening , somebody knocked on my door .I hemmed , but nobody opened , though it's obvious that the " hem " has an international meaning.

- Come one , I yelled nervously. Ofcourse , it wasn't the old lady because she never came to my room during the night.It wasn't the " major " because he didn't stand me , it was " Sandra " ,ofcourse .

I was abit scared , because - as I said - I never liked her.I also didn't accept the fact that everybody liked her because she was gorgeous.

She was wearing a black blouse and a spiffy grey skirt .It seemed to me that she had just finished eating because she was chewing something . She came close to me and looked at my papers in flirtatious act and said , " what are you writing ?", " memoirs " , I replied .