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OPPOSITE TO LOVE

 
 
joe1949
 
Reply Tue 28 Sep, 2004 04:39 pm
Edit: Moderator: Moved from Poetry to Original Writing

I don't belive in it,
Word i never use,
Evil in its way,
Anger so unkind,
Brings sadness to my heart,
To say it to someone, is so cold,
Sends shivers down my spine,
To here it, don't like the sound,
Why do people say it,
I don't understand,
That word don't say it,
You will be a better person,
Without it.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 28 Sep, 2004 06:38 pm
Good words joe! Haven't seen you around in a long time!
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InfraBlue
 
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Reply Tue 28 Sep, 2004 07:37 pm
So, what's alternative word for expressing, among a host of other things, one's willingness to sacrifice oneself for another?
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 28 Sep, 2004 07:38 pm
I don't think there HAS to be a word for it, why can't people just feel it and show it and leave it at that!
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InfraBlue
 
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Reply Tue 28 Sep, 2004 07:44 pm
We're human beings, we need words for everything we can think of.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 28 Sep, 2004 07:45 pm
Well I must not be human, I don't need words to make me feel loved or secure!
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InfraBlue
 
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Reply Tue 28 Sep, 2004 07:48 pm
I'm human, I'd like a word for expressing, among a host of other things, one's willingness to sacrifice oneself for another.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 28 Sep, 2004 07:51 pm
The thing about the human race is that they always have to know everything. If we were supposed to know everything, we would. I'm comfortable with not knowing such simple things, but that's my opinion. Some people need more then others.
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InfraBlue
 
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Reply Tue 28 Sep, 2004 08:58 pm
We're obsessive that way.
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roger
 
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Reply Tue 28 Sep, 2004 09:04 pm
The opposite of love is probably boredom.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Tue 28 Sep, 2004 10:32 pm
Excellent piece, Joe! Keep it coming!
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joe1949
 
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Reply Wed 29 Sep, 2004 06:57 am
opposite to love
Thank you all for your comments,much appreciated.I am still finding my way
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Wed 29 Sep, 2004 07:05 am
InfraBlue wrote:
I'm human, I'd like a word for expressing, among a host of other things, one's willingness to sacrifice oneself for another.


Poetically, you already expressed it, 'human'. You could also go with 'humanist' or 'humanitarian'. Or...you could wrap yourself in dogma and call it 'Jesus'. On a more base level, say, if you have given up too much to someone who abuses your 'sacrifice', you could always go with 'sucker'. Heh heh. Laughing The point is, there are many words to express that willingness to sacrifice oneself for another, or for a cause. What's important to a poem is how the words and sentiments are strung together.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Wed 29 Sep, 2004 07:07 am
roger wrote:
The opposite of love is probably boredom.


Well stated, but to me, the opposite of love is indifference, across the board from the personal to the general.
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InfraBlue
 
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Reply Wed 29 Sep, 2004 10:04 pm
Poetically, I'd like a word to distinguish "human," meaning "indifference," from "human," meaning "one's willingness to sacrifice oneself for another." "Sucker" is a good synonym for it.
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