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Tue 21 Sep, 2004 01:08 pm
shadows ring out pulsed
catching drops of light
traversing the cosmic plane
stars wink and plummet
the night clouds devour the moon
only darkness and noise
like a candle in a black room
the only light
but still i put it out.
Subtle but sweet emotion! Nice poem, keep'em comin'!! Welcome to a2k!!
a-c, welcome to A2K. Your poem was really loaded with imagery, even though it was seductively compressed. I was particularly impressed with the last line--"....but still I put it out."
Hope that you will continue to write more, my friend.
I must agree with the mighty Letty. An intense piece with a powerful end, like a fine cognac!
Gorsh, Kelly, that was a mighty fine compliment. <smile>
a-c, suggestion. Run through all the original writing threads and let us know your thoughts. Kelly ain't no slouch, either.
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