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That Satisfaction

 
 
Reply Mon 20 Sep, 2004 03:52 pm
to my unloved love in Cape Town may you never read this poem as it will only give you satisfaction to know that I care for you. to the readers of this poem I hope you are not as romantic as I am, as I still hold ideals even in the face of addiction.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Tue 21 Sep, 2004 11:43 am
I'm certain nobody here could claim your title of 'chief romantic' after that fine poem, friend :-)
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Reply Tue 21 Sep, 2004 11:47 am
thanks kelly it's hard writing personal stuff and getting responses cos there's a little bit of my soul in this kind of poem, it's not just a description of a scene but rather a way of coping with an emotion by writing it down
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 21 Sep, 2004 11:51 am
Isn't that how most poems are? A piece of ones soul, a way of coping with emotions by writing them down? By the way, nice poem!! Keep it up!!
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Reply Tue 21 Sep, 2004 11:54 am
thanks, yes and no some poems are less personal then others. I mean you ever read Standing on Westminster bridge or the White Cliffs of Dover they can never be as personal our revealing as something like Song (Christina Rosseti) or Howl by Allen Ginsberg.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Tue 21 Sep, 2004 11:55 am
If you go back through history and read some of the greatest poetry, it was written in the same spirit and premise of yours. Keep that stuff coming! I (and probably not just me here) love it!
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Reply Tue 21 Sep, 2004 11:57 am
thanks kelly much appreciatedm and I mean that you know I dug your other poem black diamond(s) I think it was called.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 21 Sep, 2004 12:02 pm
I have to feel the emotion of a poem to like a poem. I mean, anyone can write, but without the emotion it's pretty much dead, at least in my opinion.
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Reply Tue 21 Sep, 2004 12:09 pm
i agree stand up... art's about expression
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