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I Thought (a poem)

 
 
Reply Sat 18 Sep, 2004 11:34 am
I thought you cared about me
I thought you knew me
I thought you were my friend
But I thought wrong

All you are is someone I'll never be
You say I'm your friend
But am I really?
Think about it.

All the good times,
Laughter, sorrow, anger, joy
We were in it together
Or so I thought

I thought that we stood by each other
I thought that you'd be there for me forever
I thought that we were close
But I thought wrong

How can life be so messed up?
All I ever wanted was to be your friend
But, you couldn't care less
We're not friends

I thought you cared about me
I thought you knew me
I thought you were my friend
But I thought wrong.

We're nothing but acquaintances
A laugh here and there
Tension everywhere
I wanted to be your friend

But of all the things I've thought
The silliest was this:
I thought I meant something to you
But obviously you were just using me

I thought you cared about me
I thought you knew me
I thought you were my friend
But I thought wrong.

I mean nothing to you
But you mean everything to me
You could not care less about me
And I could not care more about you

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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 18 Sep, 2004 02:23 pm
Not amateurish at all. Change your name!
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amateur writer
 
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Reply Sat 18 Sep, 2004 04:28 pm
Thanks for the nice comment, Kelly.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 18 Sep, 2004 08:21 pm
I feel the pain.....good job......and welcome to a2k, i hope to see more from you!
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amateur writer
 
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Reply Sun 19 Sep, 2004 04:10 pm
You could never understand who I really was
And you never will

You never gave me a chance to show you who I really was
And you're going to regret that

You could never see me for who I really was
I was never your friend, just a follower

You will never know how much I care about you
Or how much I wanted you to care about me

You will never know what you meant to me
Or how much I wanted to mean something to you

You will never know the pain I felt
Or how much you hurt me

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It has some errors that I wish I knew how to fix them. Well, this is the forum for it.
Thanks everyone.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sun 19 Sep, 2004 04:31 pm
I went through that whole thing once, I think we all have. I wrote a letter to the person, and unfortunately, I still have it! I just made myself move on. Writing your emotions down is a big start!
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 20 Sep, 2004 09:41 am
Poetry: counseling for the soul :-)
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