Reply Fri 17 Sep, 2004 01:12 pm
Harbor

She weaved out to the harbor
Born of bad blood and
The baddest seed - through the weathered
Skeletal piers of contemplation -
Navigating -
This is where the rainbows end.
There was a ghostly angel imprint
In the clouds, looking down on her, or
On the sea - swear she could
The distance spy a staircase to
That piece of sky.
But what, if not a purpose met,
The meaning held colloquial -
As in some distant conversation
Or constellation
Or revelation
Never blew her horn in anger -
And now the fog consumes.

2004 KV
Fresh today and unpublished Very Happy
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Reply Sat 18 Sep, 2004 10:22 am
Kelly, Your poem is really lovely. I felt the words ".....through the weathered skeletal piers of contemplation...."

A woman and the sea--I think your verse just became a part of me......
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 18 Sep, 2004 10:24 am
Incidentally, my poetic friend. Welcome to A2K.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 18 Sep, 2004 02:25 pm
You are very gracious Letty - thanks on both counts!
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