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Weather Whether

 
 
Reply Wed 15 Sep, 2004 07:15 pm
For my wife, from Spontaneous Poems again. She loved it:

Weather or whether,
never interferes
with our fears,
except on days
the tumult rises,
in seemingly overwhelming
sizes.

We sit and think,
think and talk,
take a mental walk
down memory lane.

Then our thoughts become
a strange parade of welcome,
and 'yes'.
Doubly blessed,
we are.
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dyslexia
 
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Reply Wed 15 Sep, 2004 07:29 pm
Love is mainly just memories
everyone's got them a few.
So when I'm gone
I'll be glad to love you.

when the lady Diane and I have a difference, I usually say nothing, walk up behind her and kiss the back of her neck. She smiles. I love that.
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onyxelle
 
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Reply Wed 15 Sep, 2004 07:30 pm
oh my gawd Dys. That is sooooo luhvalee
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Wed 15 Sep, 2004 07:34 pm
Neck kisses work too. Smile
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onyxelle
 
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Reply Wed 15 Sep, 2004 07:42 pm
men sharing secrets. ewwww lol.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Mon 4 Oct, 2004 11:53 am
At least we're not in a steam room with bongos, onyx. Smile
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 4 Oct, 2004 01:16 pm
Two words for this poem: Platonic Bliss!
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Mon 4 Oct, 2004 01:21 pm
Platonic Bliss...nice. I like that. Smile
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 4 Oct, 2004 01:23 pm
Your wife is a lucky woman, my friend!
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