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Reply Mon 13 Sep, 2004 12:13 pm
a broken sentence
resembles
the line of thought
issued by a nomad
crossing the desert to
a pilgrimage of abstractions.

under tragic stars
fate conspires against you
compelled to give confession
you kneel before the stones
still believing in the
aesthetics of reflections.
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Reply Tue 14 Sep, 2004 01:26 am
Very nice!
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