askchester
 
Reply Mon 13 Sep, 2004 12:12 pm
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from the scene
a quiet thought paces

between origins sealed
under the prismatic sky.

analyze pragmatic
distortions
bury any inclinations in the fox hole

kill the flesh
feed the spirit
soon we shine through the bones

luminous echoes canvas the plot
searching for his lost time.
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Reply Tue 14 Sep, 2004 01:28 am
A sort of out-of-body poetic experience. Nebulous and presumably ambiguous - a goos piece!
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