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Reply Sun 12 Sep, 2004 03:40 pm
Edit: Moderator: Moved from Poetry (that forum is for published poetry, such as by Poe) to Original Writing (this is for your own poetry

All I need is understanding,
That's not too much to ask,
It's not my fault I'm slow or clumsy,
So would you be,
If you were me,
So give me a chance,
I'm still me, can't you see,
You can walk away,
You can set yourself free,
Not me.
I'm the one stuck in a body,
That cannot work for me,
Inside that body, it's me,
I'm still here,
I've accepted this new me,
So accept it with me.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 14 Sep, 2004 04:41 pm
I liked it nells! Good writing style!!
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nells1961
 
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Reply Tue 14 Sep, 2004 04:48 pm
understanding
thank so much something i'm trying out, i'm new to poetry, but its worth a try.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 14 Sep, 2004 04:49 pm
"Practice makes perfect"
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joe1949
 
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Reply Wed 29 Sep, 2004 06:50 am
poem
Good words and understanding,and its so true. People should accept you for who you are.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Wed 29 Sep, 2004 07:19 am
I like it too! I vote we move it back to the "Poe" forum! Well done!
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Wed 29 Sep, 2004 07:24 am
I thought the piece was honest, straightforward and very touching. The Poe comment from the moderator was completely unnecessary, IMHO.
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