Seed
 
Reply Sun 12 Sep, 2004 12:22 am
You looked at me with eye so shinning
With a smile upon your face
A laugh upon your voice

My heart was softened
My knees grew weak
I reached to steady myself

Your glance held me
Your smile carassed me
Your laugh sang to me

Caught in a moment
I danced with you
Hand in hand, cheek to cheek

My mind raced to and fro
Could this be, me with you
Our bodies so close

Caught in a moment
It seems to last forever
The place to be, is next to you
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sun 12 Sep, 2004 02:30 am
Simple, sweet, and amorous. I like it.
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Mister Micawber
 
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Reply Sun 12 Sep, 2004 04:27 am
It needs proofreading.
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