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Thu 23 Jan, 2003 02:26 pm
As much as I like Post Post-Medernism, here's a blast from the past I wrote a few years ago for a special lady
God's Gift
She knows me as a trusting confidant
her secrets that I keep, trust never breaks
these waves of love, the ebb and flow they want
to wash away this burning heart that aches
Could this be lust that tempts my living soul
to wish that we were lovers, two as one
the bond we have so precious few extol
lust won't exhume my body's soul when done
I gaze into her smiling angel eyes
blue portals to her Heaven's soul so pure
yet all my thoughts of love they do surmise
these two never make one, I must endure
past loves resolved yet not dissolved they rhyme
suspended in love's waves as sands of time.
The truest measure of friendship is honesty
Copyright 2001 tfalwrtr
How very sweet. :-D
Welcome to Able2Know!
I do. Most of my poems are somehow related to sonnet, like the one I've posted here ('Blessing').
When actually writing sonnets I use AABB BAAB AAA BBB or close to that. I just like fancy rhymes and rhytm
... Sometimes something like AABBCC ABABCC ABAB AABB is better for me even though that's not a classic sonnet.
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