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Fri 3 Sep, 2004 04:32 am
Just two verses for now, it might get longer (or better) with time.
Let all within the scope of mind
And all in sight of human eye
Find telling at the poet's hand
Or else by none, lest beauty die
Fragile beauty rests a space
To let us glimpse of life's true worth
But clumsy hands shall crush her grace
And kill outright all her mirth
Keep it up. It reads well now, but if you expand it, I'd be interested to see where it goes.
I love it, fortune. I do hope I get to see that expansion.
It is a wonderful start to a great puzzle. Finish it for us!
Stand up, fortune is no longer here, but I'm sure she is all right.
Really, i've been gone for awhile with moving and stuff. When is she comin' back? Where did she go? Aww, I never got to say bye. Thanks for filling me in Letty.
Hey, girl. I've been absent from the PC myself for a bit. Storms, ya know! I wish I could tell you more, honey. Glad you're back postin'
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