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Reply Fri 3 Sep, 2004 02:33 am
Medicated,
we meander through
life's thievery of time.
Sedated,
we block the vivid colours
of feeling with the clenched fist
of routine.

Pale, wan ghosts we are,
marking the hours
with the sidewalk chalk
of our sensible shoes.
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drom et reve
 
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Reply Fri 3 Sep, 2004 02:52 am
Wonderful words, Cav. Routine is a slow death...

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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 3 Sep, 2004 03:01 am
Thanks drom. I tried office work, a long time ago and decided it was either quit or hang myself with my own tongue, the attempt of which would have been far more interesting than the job. I think you should take a peek at the last entry in the profanity thread. I dug up a rare deleted Eliot limerick...
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drom et reve
 
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Reply Fri 3 Sep, 2004 03:13 am
Weirdly, I checked it out before reading this; our minds must be on an unusual synch. You know that I will always laugh loudly about good Eliot-related humour Very Happy. (There's not much of that these days...)

O, the only office job that I ever had was working out gas bills-- was yours more boring than this? (I'm guessing that it was.) I threw it in after a day and a half. I can't stand office politics, or being stuck in one place...

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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 3 Sep, 2004 03:17 am
When I was younger, I took on a few horrible jobs, just to make a little disposable cash. I worked in a print shop, did filing for an accountant and a laywer, and spent two days as a theatre usher as a teen. I did work for a contractor for a bit, painting houses and doing some construction work but was fired because honestly, I have no clue how to do any of that stuff. Very Happy
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Reply Fri 3 Sep, 2004 03:43 am
I'm very impressed with your poem, cav. To me, it's not just about work, but also about struggling with personal pain by blocking it out & going through the motions of living.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 3 Sep, 2004 03:52 am
Thanks msolga. I suppose that must mean it's good poetry, if it works on different levels. I was pleased with it.
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drom et reve
 
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Reply Fri 3 Sep, 2004 04:09 am
I like your interpretation, Olga.

Oh no! How did you get a job painting without knowing how to do it? Was there any particular reason why your ushering lasted a few days? Thinking about things, I have only ever had that job, and a job in lecturing, that were jobs that I did for others... I guess that I prefer reaping my work's benefits for myself...

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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 3 Sep, 2004 04:32 am
Contractor job, dad is an architect, he was trying to do me a favour setting me up there.

Usher job, first puke clean-up, I was out of there. As the 'junior', my Nazi boss made me do all the really crappy jobs.
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theollady
 
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Reply Fri 3 Sep, 2004 01:32 pm
cavfancier said....'i was out of there.....'

Laughing Laughing Laughing

(I had a FEW of those experiences, Cav... unfortunately, I couldn't
"quit" the job, they were my children...)
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Fri 3 Sep, 2004 01:37 pm
Laughing
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Sat 11 Sep, 2004 06:14 am
Stunning, stark, sad and vivid - all wrapped in a spicy burrito!
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