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2 simple songs...

 
 
Reply Fri 27 Aug, 2004 01:05 am
The first two songs I wrote... extremely simple but I like 'em


The Right Thing to Do

Everytime I look at you
I see your pretty face
And everytime I hear your voice
I cry in disgrace
Oh, I want to be with you
It's all I want to do
Oh, spend my life with you
It's the right thing to do

Promises I've broken
is all you have of me
But we can start all over
and make new memories
Oh, I'll wear my new shoes
And search for a clue
About what to do
When, When I am with you

Things that have happened
have changed me in the past
So we can start all over
and this time make it last
Oh, this time: number two
Is too good to be true
Oh, I want to be with you
It's all I want to do

To Lindsay Weir

I wish that I could go back in time and meet you there
I wish that I could go into my dreams and wake you there
I wish that I could be in touch with your lips and kiss you there
I wish that I could make my own real world and you'd be there

'Cause you are everything I want to see
And you are everyone I want to be with
You are my hopes, my greatest desire
And you'll be forever, in my heart and dreams

80's girl, I don't like that you're not real
80's girl, what I love is how you make me feel
To you i sing this song of love 'cause you are my reason to be
And I hope that I can find someoe like you to keep
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RoseMarie
 
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Reply Fri 27 Aug, 2004 01:26 am
Mmm, very good work... I tried putting it to music, but I just couldn't do it, I'm sure yours is muuuuuuch better :wink:
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lainchance
 
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Reply Sat 28 Aug, 2004 08:01 am
I love the latter one better Smile

Do you play it? really want to hear.
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Pantalones
 
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Reply Sat 28 Aug, 2004 01:43 pm
I do play.... kinda

But I definitively don't sing... I'll try to record it just for kicks... someday not far from today

Very Happy
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lainchance
 
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Reply Tue 31 Aug, 2004 01:39 am
Waiting for the day!

And when you play them, dun forget to play loundly in case I cannot hear in China Smile
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