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Reply Sun 24 Apr, 2016 06:48 am
This is my description of the picture (for children).
I can see six children in the picture. They are in the countryside. They are swimming in the lake, playing ball, watering vegetables in the garden, picking apples. I think they are staying in the countryside for one week. They are happy because they are all smiling. They are in a good mood. I can feel their happiness. They are having a good time!
Is this text grammatically correct? I mean articles and etc. And can I use Present Continious Tense describing the picture with childrens' actions? Or better use Present simple, for example: They swim, play ball and etc? Thank you!
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Tes yeux noirs
Reply Sun 24 Apr, 2016 07:35 am
Everything looks good. Use of articles is correct. Present continuous is appropriately used.
Reply Sun 24 Apr, 2016 07:52 am
@Tes yeux noirs,
Thank you for reply!
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