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This booking was made for Jay's business trip. He is the head of our company.

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Reply Sat 26 Sep, 2015 07:14 am
This booking was made for Jay's business trip. He is the head of our company.

I have joined the sentences as follows. Is it correct?

This booking was made for a business trip by Jay, head of our company.

Thanks.
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roger
 
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Reply Sat 26 Sep, 2015 03:23 pm
@tanguatlay,
Yes. The change also sounds more natural.
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FBM
 
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Reply Sat 26 Sep, 2015 05:39 pm
@tanguatlay,
tanguatlay wrote:

This booking was made for a business trip by Jay, the head of our company.


I can't say that this is 100% necessary, but it sure sounds better to me.
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