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Where are you.....

 
 
Reply Sun 22 Aug, 2004 08:34 pm
How long have I been waiting?
What will become of all this hating?
Were you here, when I was unaware?
While I was bleeding, did you care?
Who were you, when I was mistaken?
How were you, when my heart was breaking?
Did you know that I went insane?
Do you feel it, were you to blame?
Can you remove these awful scars?
Pass me one of my guitars.
I'll sing this song I wrote for you,
with a vengeance, through and through.
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fortune
 
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Reply Sun 22 Aug, 2004 08:39 pm
Very powerful, SUFP.
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DC DarkAngel89
 
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Reply Mon 23 Aug, 2004 09:53 pm
This was really good SUFP...I liked it alot. Your work is always very real.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 29 Sep, 2004 08:55 pm
Thanks!
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Thu 30 Sep, 2004 12:47 am
So many questions - so few answers.... Sweet piece!
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