Quote:Underneath a scant shade of a mango tree,ninety people gathered to talk about the shortage of food facing their community.
"the scant shade", not "a scant shade"
a indicates that the tree is casting multiple shadows and that you are referring to a specific one of those shadows...but we only have 1 sun, so it only casts 1 shadow, so use "the"
you imply that the shade is in a small area (scant) but that there are a lot of people there (90) which would take up a large area. which is it, a large area or a small area?
Quote:From a distance , there was a dramatic backdrop of the impressive granite bulk of the mount Mulanjie, rising out from the plains.
This sentence is good enough grammatically, but it is a bit awkward.
This is a much more natural way to say it:
Mt. Mulanjie rose out of the plains in the distance, it's granite bulk setting an impressive backdrop for the scene.
Quote:People used their umbrellas to shade themselves at time they expected to use them in conventional ways.
"at time" doesn't fit here, try:
People used their umbrellas to shade themselves,
when they
had expected to use them in conventional ways [or conventionally].
Quote:A week before Christmas,we were invited over to lunch with women of the village. They said,come to see what we eat,come to lunch.
the second sentence is not good reading, and it's content can be implied by the first sentence by writing more descriptively:
A week before Christmas, we were invited to lunch by the village women.
A week before Christmas, the village women invited us to lunch.
Quote:Ironically,there were many women around the world gathering for lunch and many people enjoying Christmas's turkey.The menu was "wild" beans in different stages.Ofcourse,it wasn't like good photos shots to the "HouseKeeping".The beans were poisonous and killing instantly!It need cooking all the day long with the precious water and firewoods.Then, peeled ,removing the sticky outing before it was served.At the same time,pots should be guarded or the kids would eat before making sure of sanitation.
oh boy, a lot of work needed here.
1 - there is no irony in this situation
there is too much work that needs to be done here for me to make specific comments...the main issue is that you need to work on keeping your tense consistent.
along is one word
Quote:far a way looking for jobs
away is one word
Quote:The pay would be just food and the lucky one who came back with maize as a good payment
the lucky one
s who came back
with food would get maize as payment
which verbs?