I feel like..

Re: I feel like..
Hi Navigator:

I'm sorry that you feel neglected. Explaining English grammar is not my forte. I write all the time, but my technical knowledge is limited. In other words, I'm not an expert. However, I can rewrite some of your posts if that will help. I will start with your post that originated this thread.



Hi A2K Members:

My current position requires me to use proper grammar. I joined this forum to obtain assistance to learn the nuances of the English language. Recently, I posted several writing exercises and requested input. Few members responded and I am frustrated.

In order to learn, I expend considerable time and effort on my reading and writing exercises. I would appreciate help from those who are willing to give it.

Thank you,
Navigator

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SEE ^ LOL I'm not a helper who merely corrects awkward sentences, phrases, and word usages. I rewrite.

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I will try assisting you with the first sentence:



Hi A2K Members:

Based on the limited responses to my recent posts, I feel that A2K members are not interested in helping me with my writing skills. This makes me sad because I expend considerable effort on my writing exercises.


I believe you meant to use the word "too" instead of "either" in your final sentence.

Keep posting. The more you write, the better you get.

I'm sorry, I don't quite understand that. Could you rephrase it? I'm only 14 you gotta help me out here.

YOU ARE SOOO ANGEL Debra_Law but that was'nt my writing . I mean, it wasn't meant to be for grammar correction or style.But,thank you for your concern.You are a kind person.

navigator, I am sorry that you're feeling neglected. It was not at all intentional (at least on my part).

Please keep writing, it would be a pity indeed for you to become discouraged now. Personally I have been busy over the last few days and so may have missed a few of your posts. I promise to do my best to help you (whatever good that may be to you) whenever time permits.

Thanks ...this means too much for me..I will never stop!

Hey, Navigator:

I love your stories, and I give rather detailed analyses of nearly all of them, in accordance with the accepted Oxonian style. I didn't reply to the very last one, because it seems that you only desire help with 'American' ....

thanks ...

You're sweet.


So true, Navigator! Even though you did not intend your post to be subjected to a rewrite, I wanted to show you that I care about your writing. You should endeavor to make all your writing an exercise in excellence. Keep writing and keep improving!

navigator,

I have gone through and edited most of the grammatical mistakes in the last 9 threads you have made

i have not seen a single thread you have made which has gone un-assisted

you are not being neglected and i resent your unthankful attitude, i for one have spent a few hours editing your work alone

no..I really appreciate what you have done to me stuh,I'm sorry if I hurt anyone here.I don't deny your help,NEVER.You taught me and I want you to teach me more and more.Thank you sir for everythings so far.

What's the bottom line here people? Original writing doesn't get as much attention as political threads...but we try. Writers should show a little patience. We can all get along :wink:

You tell 'em, Panzade!