Everyday.........

ooh.

That's rather on the depressing side, old bean. Do you have unresolved issues? Perhaps one should steer clear of you til you have overcome said issues.

I say, i do appear to be communicating my meaning in a rather pompous manner would you not agree? Perhaps I think i must still be on the 'can we talk?' thread?.. or maybe all this tip-tap-typing has gone to my head and made me slightly insane. hum.

Anyway, I'll try to write 'normally' now. SUFP i think your writing is very good (tis nice to know us youngens still have some semblance of imagination.. and thoughts.. and things like that)..

oh it's no use i just can't dooo sensible.. until we meet again i will be partying most happily.

LOL annifa!!! This poem was strictly just an imagination piece, nothing so far like this is going on in my life.....hmmm maybe it's a sign....I should be more careful....


Thanks annifa!!!

I liked this poem, I liked it how it was like you were thinking the whole time. good job, another great work of art!

Everyday.......... is a winding road
i get a little bit closer
Everyday is a faded sign
i get a little bit closer to feeling fine..

Sheryl Crow(e?) styleeeee.. lalalalalala

Speaking of which, I seem to remember (correct me if I'm wrong) that on another thread you said you play a musical instrument, SUFP. Have you tried putting any of this to music?

Yes, I play guitar, but no, havn't put it to music yet. Wasn't sure if it was worthy of it or not.

go for it

The words are emotive so they'd probably go well to music.

Ok fortune, because you seem to know what you're talkin' about. What kind of music in your opinion should it be? Ballad? Soft rock? Fast rock? Country? Metal?...lol...

Me? Expert? No way, no how! I just knows what I likes.

Having said that, I was kinda thinking along the lines of Jewel's older stuff, but whatever suits your style.

Cool. If I had to classify my song writing/music I would like it to sound like folk rock.