Reply Sun 17 Jan, 2016 11:12 pm
hello..
can some one help me write a simple passage using these words:
contraption, roamed,massive,submerged,elegant,obstacles,complicated,eerie

thank you
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Reply Mon 18 Jan, 2016 01:42 am
@noorabah,
Having entered the massive contraption, and having sealed the complicated yet elegant hatches, we submerged and roamed the eerie depths, taking care to avoid all obstacles.
noorabah
 
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Reply Mon 18 Jan, 2016 10:44 pm
@fresco,
thank you fresco..
can i have it as a short story for a 4th grade student please
fresco
 
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Reply Tue 19 Jan, 2016 02:04 am
@noorabah,
Sorry...we don't actually 'do homework'.....what would be the point?
But I am sure you can expand my sentence into a story if you know what the words mean.
noorabah
 
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Reply Wed 20 Jan, 2016 03:50 am
@fresco,
my son has started writing this:
Last week at school i have made a neat contraption for science class. It was a bit complicated and i have faced obstacles when i was trying to make this machine. i named my massive invention *****.

is this correct?
can you help us please with the rest of the words
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noorabah
 
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Reply Wed 20 Jan, 2016 06:46 am
@fresco,
Last week at school i have made a neat contraption for science class. It was a bit complicated and i have faced obstacles when i was trying to make this machine. i named my massive invention the flamer. As i started the machine all flames came out throwing eerie lights everywhere. The students eyes roamed over the machine.

is this correct?
can you help us please with the words elegant and submerged plz?
fresco
 
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Reply Wed 20 Jan, 2016 09:15 am
@noorabah,
Quote:
Last week at school I made an elegant contraption for science class. It was a bit complicated and I faced obstacles when I was trying to make this machine. I named my massive invention "the flamer". When I started the machine everything was submerged in an eerie light causing weird shadows to roam around the walls.

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