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the dream

 
 
Reply Sun 8 Aug, 2004 09:21 am
a beautiful laugh
turned to a glutereal growl
eyes full of life
darkend by death
a body full of love and warmth
withered by hate and coldness
a warm loving hug
turned to a killing strangle


this is a poem i wrote about 2 weeks ago it was an acctuall dream i have had and i woke up from it and writhe this dark and haunting poem ( it is dark and haunting to me from past events)
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Rick d Israeli
 
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Reply Sun 8 Aug, 2004 09:23 am
I do like it (though I'm normally not a real poetry lover)
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